Here is the first draft he sent me:
and here are a few other options with a few tweaks
I am very interested in any feedback anyone has, so please take a look and leave a comment or email me.
An inventory of my travels, my experiences, and my overall passion as an aspiring Chef
"Travel changes you. As you move through this life and this world you change things slightly, you leave marks behind, however small. And in return, life - and travel - leaves marks on you. Most of the time, those marks - on your body or on your heart - are beautiful. Often, though, they hurt."
- Anthony Bourdain
I'm liking the first one at the top. It's the simplest and directs the reader's eyes from top to bottom. Nice stuff.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Liv. The first one at the top is definitely the one that caught my eye. Its bold and gets the point across
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